http://fantasyfiend09.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] fantasyfiend09.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] hd_eighthyear 2015-09-04 03:00 am (UTC)

I love that the debt had a physical effect on the debtor. Very interesting. Poor Draco trying so hard and repeatedly brushed off. You described his reactions to each snub very well so that the reader sees what Draco is still denying.
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