I loved Draco's imaginary crown. What a great way to convey how confident he is feeling and the way he tries to portray himself to the world! I just loved those moments when he looked for this crown or realized he'd dropped it in the corridor.
I loved Draco's wank fantasies! Oh my goodness! They were three porny ficlets neatly tucked into this fic, and it was (for this reader) like biting into a chocolate only to discover a cherry liqueur center! There liqueur centers! But with porn!
I think what I really want to say is that your Draco was amazing and oh so realistically a randy teenage boy. Not that Harry wasn't lovely, and Neville, but Draco stole the show for me.
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I loved Draco's wank fantasies! Oh my goodness! They were three porny ficlets neatly tucked into this fic, and it was (for this reader) like biting into a chocolate only to discover a cherry liqueur center! There liqueur centers! But with porn!
I think what I really want to say is that your Draco was amazing and oh so realistically a randy teenage boy. Not that Harry wasn't lovely, and Neville, but Draco stole the show for me.